My comment on "Paris attacks:Hollande blames Islamie State for act of war"
I woke up with this news in the morning.I am so sorry about people who died in explosions in
Paris.I am able to understand very well those people in Paris as we have lived an explosion in
Ankara about a month ago.That was so bad and painful.Almost two hundred people died in that explosion in Ankara.People in Paris and the government think that the explosions were carried out by IS militant group.They say that the explosions are related to Syria and Syrian people.What's more,the president of France, Mr Hollande has declared three days of mourning just like we did in Turkey after the explosion in Ankara.In addition to this, Mr Hollande has banned in and outs on the borders. Turkey should have done the same thing after the explosion.Turkey's borders are truly off-guard.People can enter Turkey whenever they want.Therefore,we have a great deal of people coming from other countries as they have no place to go.Some of those people are Syrian and France is so angry about Syria and Syrian people right now.In other words, I am concerned about Turkey because it seems that Turkey will be affected by this event in a bad way.
Dear Büşra,
YanıtlaSilI really liked reading your news. It is really sad to read such tragic events happening all over the world. You have expressed your feelings quite clearly and effectively.You have organized your writing quite well. Your use of English is also quite effective. I think you might revise the sentence satrting with Mr. Hollande. It seems to be a bit formal (e.g., just like we did). I am looking forward to reading your next reflections. Thank you.